Category: Communication

It was a bright cold day in april and the clocks were stricking thirteen. Winston Smith, his chin nuzzled into his breasts in an effort to escape the vile wind, slipped quickly through the glass doors of victory mansion, though not quickly enough to prevent a sworl of gritty dust enter along wih him

It was a bright cold day. The clocks were stricking thirteen. Winston Smith, his chin nuzzled into his breasts in an effort to escape the vile wind. He slipped quickley though the doors of victory mansion; though not quickley enough to prevent a swirl a of gritty dust entering along with him

The classroom is silent.

The classroom is full of boys awaiting their fate

Verbs: Is X2, awaiting

He classroom is full of boys awaiting their fate which is silent

The problem is that the text is that it says that he fate is silent

STARTER

Example of a noun phrase:

The gun, heavy in his hand, sxared him.

The noun phrase is heavy in his hand

MAIN WORK

VERB ADVERB

Jerking in scilence. In, is the adverbial

It’s not safe.
We could stay one more day.
It’s not safe.
Well maybe we could find some other place on the river.
We have to keep moving. We have to keep heading south.
Dosen’t the river go south?
No. It doesn’t.
Can I see it on the map?
Yes. Let me see it.
Thanks.
Oh, I stand corrected.
Should we go up north. That’s the direction that the river goes.

All the dirty clouds using up the peoples hope day, after day, after day. Behind the walls, out of the peoples reach a moat so thick and black it looks like you can walk on it. The robots are ruthless and do  not care if they kill you or not, past the forbidden walls of death. If you are alive do NOT walk towards a black massive island with clouds swirling around the island with THE ROBOTS. Run as far away as POSSIBLE!