subordinate clauses

May 13, 2015 / / 0 Comments

It was a bright cold day in april and the clocks were stricking thirteen. Winston Smith, his chin nuzzled into his breasts in an effort to escape the vile wind, slipped quickly through the glass doors of victory mansion, though not quickly enough to prevent a sworl of gritty dust enter along wih him

It was a bright cold day. The clocks were stricking thirteen. Winston Smith, his chin nuzzled into his breasts in an effort to escape the vile wind. He slipped quickley though the doors of victory mansion; though not quickley enough to prevent a swirl a of gritty dust entering along with him

Relative clauses

May 7, 2015 / / 0 Comments

The classroom is silent.

The classroom is full of boys awaiting their fate

Verbs: Is X2, awaiting

He classroom is full of boys awaiting their fate which is silent

The problem is that the text is that it says that he fate is silent

Adverbials

April 28, 2015 / / 0 Comments

STARTER

Example of a noun phrase:

The gun, heavy in his hand, sxared him.

The noun phrase is heavy in his hand

MAIN WORK

VERB ADVERB

Jerking in scilence. In, is the adverbial

Continue the dialouge

March 26, 2015 / / 0 Comments

It’s not safe.
We could stay one more day.
It’s not safe.
Well maybe we could find some other place on the river.
We have to keep moving. We have to keep heading south.
Dosen’t the river go south?
No. It doesn’t.
Can I see it on the map?
Yes. Let me see it.
Thanks.
Oh, I stand corrected.
Should we go up north. That’s the direction that the river goes.

Re-write of work

March 19, 2015 / / 0 Comments

All the dirty clouds using up the peoples hope day, after day, after day. Behind the walls, out of the peoples reach a moat so thick and black it looks like you can walk on it. The robots are ruthless and do  not care if they kill you or not, past the forbidden walls of death. If you are alive do NOT walk towards a black massive island with clouds swirling around the island with THE ROBOTS. Run as far away as POSSIBLE!

Methods that Shakespeare uses to keep the audience interested in his play macbeth

February 25, 2015 / / 1 Comment

Word play

there are two different types of word play that Shakespeare uses in Macbeth, one of them is personification. personification means when you give a human characteristic to an object. There are 7 personifications in he whole of the play in Macbeth. one is this “Stars, hide your fires! Let not light see my black and deep desires”. To be honest there are not many pieces of personification and there are about 100 scenes in Macbeth and only seven personifications. next is

DRAMATIC DEVICES

Soliloquies

Okay so now we move on to soliloquies there are quite a phew soliloquies in the whole play. I will show you the soliloquy that Macbeth uses before he killed Duncan;” Is this a dagger which I see before me, The handle toward my hand? Come, let me clutch thee. I have thee not, and yet I see thee still. Art thou not, fatal  vision, sensible   To feeling as to sight? or art thou but  A dagger of the mind, a false creation, Proceeding from the heat-oppressed brain? Now that is an amazing example for a soliloquy

Dramatic irony

Dramatic irony is when the whole audience knows a sort of secret but only one or two characters in the play know the secret; sometimes about five characters know the secret at once. The best piece of dramatic irony in my eyes is when king Duncan says he trusts Macbeth but he knows hes got his eye on the crown which makes Macbeth feel bad because he knows what he wants and the person he want’s it from is the person that trusts him. this plainly shows that every piece of dramatic irony is proving that it makes the play Macbeth twice as more interesting if not thrice as more.

Appearance about Macbeth

at the beginning of Macbeth we don’t even know anything about him because he has not arrived i the play yet. when we first see him  we think of him as an amazing noble warrior that is invincible and cannot be defeated which obviously would make king Duncan want to award him. Later in the play we see he true evil side of Macbeth with his desires to become king of Scotland and ultimately means killing king Duncan which is treason. this prove that Macbeth wants it so bad; as the saying goes ‘if you really want something you will do anything to get it’.

Foreshadowing

foreshadowing is when someone makes a prediction on a future event and at that point of the prediction comes true. One example of this is when Macbeth is with the three whiches and the three apparitions come up and say two things and they are

  1. ‘Macbeth you will not die by a man born of a woman’
  2. ‘Macbeth will not die unless the woods of Birnam wood move’

Ending of Macbeth

WOW JUST WOW; The end of the play is just so unpredictable so Banquo   is not born yet (in a way)

science homework

February 25, 2015 / / 0 Comments

i believe that pressure is when an applied force is added to an object.

 the exertion of force upon a surface by an object; that is the scientific meaning of pressure

similarities:one is that we both say an applied force and second we are both talking about an object

Differences: the only difference that i can think of is that instead of saying an applied force it said exertion force

the differences between emotional pressure and pressure force is that emotional pressure is about the heart and mind but as for the pressure force you use the muscle and mind

 

This is Your Online Domain

May 26, 2014 / / 0 Comments

Hello and welcome to your personal online journal.

Edutronic has been created to enhance and enrich your learning at the London Nautical School. Its purpose is to provide you with an audience for your work (or work-in-progress) and you have the choice (by altering the ‘visibility’ of your posts) of whether your work on here is visible to the world, or only to your teacher.

Anything you post here in the public domain represents you and thus it’s important that you take care with that decision, but don’t be afraid to publish your work – as the feedback you may get from people at home, your peers and people from around the internet is only likely to enhance it.

Remember you can always access your class blog and all manner of resources through the Edutronic main website – and by all means check out the sites of your peers to see what they’re getting up to as well.

If you have any questions for your teacher, an excellent way to get an answer is to create a new private post on this journal. Your teachers are am notified of any new posts and will reply swiftly to any queries.

Make the most of, and enjoy this new freedom in your English learning!

May 25, 2014

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